From my feedback I have decided to include more colour to the front page as it will make it stand out more and be more attractive and eye catching. The majority of my improvements talks about one of the lines at the right side being a different colour, however this was only due to the layer being selected in photoshop therefore I have fixed this issue. I have also decided to put a box around the font on the actual model, as it will make it clearer to read and shows that it is the main cover line. Finally, I am going to include one more cover line to ensure that it does not look to plan and this will like to one of the stories in my contents page making the images used within that page more relevant.